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With more and more people going to college, it can be overwhelming to think of the competition, but it can work in your favor if you follow the tips in this article.

The number of talented high school seniors applying to college in the United States has continued to rise each year. Over the next few years, the total number of high school graduates is projected to rise by 10 percent, as is the subsequent number of students applying to college — and that means thousands more applicants in the college admissions process.

While there's enough space for all those additional students in schools across the country, the most desired schools can't accept everyone. Admission committees must weed through a significant number of applications to determine who gets accepted and who doesn't. That means it's more important than ever to meet those college admission requirements.

Colleges compete for students as well
Colleges take the competition among high school seniors for slots at their schools very seriously. Over the years, many schools have altered their recruiting tactics to fit the market. How? By turning themselves into brand names and offering incentives such as free airline tickets and college weekends in their efforts to enroll the most desirable students. So while students vie against each other to submit the best college admissions requirements to their dream school, colleges are passing out goodie bags to get the premier students through their doors.

Next steps in the college admission process

If you want to attend a great school, your best course of defense is what it's always been: work hard throughout high school to increase your chances of getting into your school of choice. The most competitive colleges will hone in on the key parts of your college admission requirements: your transcripts to determine your GPA, as well as the number of AP classes you've completed. Throw great SAT or ACT scores into the mix, and your chances of being accepted will be much better.

However, even with your best efforts, you could still be turned away — not due to any deficits, but solely to volume. Get your applications in as early as possible, create a solid list of safety schools, get a head start on the competition, and don't be afraid to ask for college admissions assistance. No matter where you end up, if you apply to schools that suit you, you'll have a great college experience!

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Last month, the 2012-13 edition of the Common Application was released. Simultaneously and/or soon after, many schools released updated supplements, several of which request at least one additional essay (in addition to the personal statement and activity essay required on the Common App).

As college admissions becomes more competitive, and more students are applying to more schools, colleges are increasingly using a student's "soft factors," including letters of recommendation, interviews, resume, and essays to transform an applicant from a series of numbers into a living, breathing human being.

Colleges don't ask you to write essays because they want to make you miserable, they are asking because they want to hear from you! They want to get to know your background, interests, goals, triumphs, failures, likes, and aversions in your own voice. When reading an essay, an admissions officer will try to determine: Who are you? Will you make a valuable contribution to your our campus community? What type of character traits do you possess? Are you responsible? Shy? Creative? A Leader? A nonconformist? How have you shown your intellectual vitality?

In order to properly plan your time in the coming months, first read through each application that you plan to submit to determine the number and nature of the essays you'll have to write.

Let's take an average college list with 12 schools for a high-achieving student who wants to study business:

  • Five reach schools: University of Pennsylvania (Wharton), Cornell University (Dyson), Georgetown University (McDonough), New York University (Stern), University of Virginia
  • Four target schools: University of Michigan, Babson College, Emory University, University of Southern California
  • Three safe schools: American University (Kogod), Brandeis University, Bentley University

With this list, there are at least 20 distinct written responses!

Not only is there a large number of essays, but each requires a considerable amount of time, effort, and thought. Many schools want to know why a student is applying to that particular college. The "Why this college" essay is often the most important -- the dealmaker. Colleges want to know what you hope to gain from your education and also what you will contribute. There are seven such essays on this list of 12 schools.

For example, the University of Pennsylvania asks, "A Penn education provides a liberal arts and sciences foundation across multiple disciplines with a practical emphasis in one of four undergraduate schools: the College of Arts and Sciences, the School of Engineering and Applied Science, the School of Nursing, or the Wharton School. Given the undergraduate school to which you are applying, please discuss how you will engage academically at Penn."

Other colleges take a particularly creative approach to the application essay prompt with the hopes that students will reply in kind.

This year, the University of Virginia asks: What is your favorite word and why?; Brandeis University queries "A package arrives at your door. After seeing the contents you know it's going to be the best day of your life. What's inside and how do you spend your day?" and University of Michigan's Honors Program wants students to "Explain Unicorns."

These questions are tough. Ultimately, college admissions officers are trying to determine who they are inviting to campus and how you think. Regardless of how the question is phrased (many schools ask applicants to write about a quotation, literary work, or philosophy topic), be sure to relate the chosen material to your own ideas, outlooks, and aspirations. Dig deep - think about who you are, what's important to you, and what you want out of your education, and make sure that your essays accurately reflect those qualities.

Here are some additional tips for students writing their college essays:

  • College admissions committees want to learn something about the applicant that they cannot learn from the rest of the application; avoid writing an essay that just reiterates the activities on your resume.
  • Choose a single incident that defines who you are today and write a clear and creative essay about it -- a story only you can tell!
  • Gimmicks (such as writing your essay in a foreign language) rarely work and often make even more work for an already over-burdened admissions officer; "sob stories," topics of public consciousness, things that happened to you in middle school, and intimate details about your dating life are not good topics.
  • Don't be afraid to write about being unsuccessful. Failure is usually a growth experience.

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